Monday, March 5, 2012

Self-critique in Composition

Did another still life to further synthesize my studies in shapes, values, media, and composition.  Shapes came with a lot more ease but I mainly struggled with composition.  I found this really helpful site with notes on tangents and was able to pick out a lot of my problem areas.  Overall, the area surrounding the wine glass is way too busy and I wish I lit the scene with more values in the top left corner because it's pretty flat.

Fail early, fail often.

Notes I took that identify my errors with compositional tangents

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